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Silence

Silence.
That's all I heard
I couldn't take it
One word
I said that one word and there was silence
Morbid stares replied
Bodies paralyzed
No eyes blinked
Not one sound of movement
Silence.

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  • Dont Lose THE ONE
    May 28, 2008
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    MAN

    This is so detailed. The person in the poem seems to be really strict and has a lot of control over the people. My favorite line(s) were: "Morbid stares replied// Bodies paralyzed// No eyes blinked// Not one sound of movement~ Amazing like I can actually visualize this. Great job!

    Taya