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To Love





To love
You like I do
Has been all too easy,
Like a long wind song blowing soft
to me

Your kiss
explodes upon
my lips with a passion
that I can not turn away from
Ever.

Lay down.
Lie next to me.
Let me touch your soft skin
feel the rhythm of your living heart
in mine






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  • XXBrunettexBarbieXX
    June 9

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    this was a great poem and it flowed smoothly..the patern was nice..it was short and sweet but i personally think there is something missing to complete your words..thanks for entering and good luck/

    ~Chrissy

  • azlyn gold member
    May 23
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    Always the true romantic!!! Best of luck!

    Az


  • Nature Song silver member
    May 23

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    Feel the rhythm of your skin upon mine. Your words speak softly here in this write. But so soft and sensual at the same time. ~Sie