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My Time has Come

I see that now, my time has come.
What did you expect me to do? It will not be long,
before I'm gone. And I just had to tell you this one thing.
I should have seen this coming, yet I was caught unaware.
I hope you will not cry,
please do not weep. I will be with you,
even if you don't believe.

I see now, that I am to go. Time passes quickly,
When I think of you.
But don't shed a tear,
I just want to say goodbye.
Because I should have seen this coming,
But it came at me like a bomb.

Unexpected and caught off guard.
I will leave you now, I love you, my dear.
We shall be apart, but not for long,
I am with you
I will never be gone.
So remember me, even if no one else does.
My time has come, soon will be gone.

Goodbye, my sweetheart.
Never fear, for I am with you.
My time has come.

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  • lowercase prelude gold member
    July 7, 2008
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    very moving. great job at conveying the emotion in this


  • B-f-m-v
    June 25, 2008
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    pretty. dying has never looked so lacey.
    -kassie


  • tellnotalesxx
    May 23, 2008
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    Very touching & sad


  • TwilightAngel026
    May 23, 2008

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    A very touching letter, Whoever this was meant for would cherish it I am sure. It is very endering, honest, and at least a little bit hopeful, yet still sad. I could feel this, and the background compliments perfectly. Thank you for your entry.


    • kiki-bunny23
      May 25, 2008
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      thank you...i pretty much just wrote it off the top of my head. I had some things on m mind so I guess thats why this turned out so good.

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