Where have you gone?
I don't know
I miss your eyes
The colors fade away
Those 2 pools of light
Gone for a lifetime it seems
I rid this feeling
With my crystal tears
A poem from an un-named being
My life has gone
A lifeless corpse
Without a song
A few trillion atoms
Have gone
Those trillion atoms
Are you and your song
Author notes
To France away, come back soon....
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i like this poem.u have alot of emotion and i think u should let her see it
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Sorry
This is a lovely poem, and I read all your comments, I'm so sorry you didn't know the truth until you found out.....
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awww
Aww Tolly, tht is so tearful... Great job!!!
You loved her once, u love her still always have and always will!!!
muah... tan
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shes back but i still havent seen her i think somethings wrong with her internet
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its day 7 and i still feel like crap because she's still gone.
but i can hold up and if i cant ill just write more poems XD -
oh my gosh thats so awsome is that what you were feeling
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...weed is stupid, leave it alone
This is a deep poems, its obvious you loved her. Well done my young poetic friend!
Mylee -
awww what i sweet poem if someone reads this you can tell that u truly love her
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A good vent of emotion, Rylan. It shows you really love her and want her back. I'm sure she appreciates that. Thanks for sharing.
Brian
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