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finish this later. :]

So let's never talk again.
We can catch up in another life time.
Sooner or later we'll be friends.
After this sorry world ends.
We would have so much to say.
I'd never get the urge to walk away.
You say I left you behind.
But a whole new world you were trying to find.
Patch things up time and time again.
I don't want you as my friend.

Because there were too many times,
I went out on the line.

Let's look back at a year or two ago.
Tell me how I was better then!
Filled with pain and sorrow,
Self esteem couldn't reach the seems,
That were holding me together.
And tearing me apart.
Tell me how I was better
Living with a broken heart.

Please tell me what you think

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  • StillWalkingAlone
    May 25, 2008
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    nice and powerful, dude. yeh, you are a much happier kid now =D you don't need her.


    • captaincrazy
      May 26, 2008
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      thanks. but i'm not done with this yet. i still have a whole other verse to add lolz. just never got the chance to do so yet. :]