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Oh How I Cried

Pain
I feel it inside
Goodbye
Oh how I cried
Heartbreak
You slipped away
Heartache
that horrible day
Heartbroken
I sang loud, sang true
Depression
Just needing you
Wondering
what I will do
Hoping
One day to see you
Hoping
wanting togetherness again
Wondering
missing you, my dear friend
Depression
I miss all our laughter today
Heartbroken
missing you in every way
Heartache
my beating heart aches
Heartbreak
pain swallowed deep inside
Oh how I cried.

Author notes

The death of my Mother in law.

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  • Lexie
    May 23, 2008
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    this poem was very very deep and full of emotions, which is very good of course. good poem


  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    May 23, 2008

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    Sorry to hear about your mother-in-law's passing. There is a lot of pain in this poem. You must have loved her very much, and she you.

    Mark