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*-* Ready 4 Love *-*

  I've got secrets
I know how to keep them

I'm not perfect
I've done things
No one would admit

I used to be a fool
Waiting for you
The days sped by
The nights wore on

Time elapsed
And you were nowhere in sight
It was only me, myself, and I

But I learned how to live
Because of you
Because of us

Now I am ready
Ready to start over
Ready for love

My heart's mended
And its out in the open
For anyone to see

Broken hearts are all around me
Looking for something to patch them up again
To sew them back together

But here we all are
In this world
Waiting to become
Complete

Author notes

Song Inspiration: Broken Hearts Parade - Good Charlotte

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  • paperbackwriter
    June 4, 2008
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    aesomw great job once again!!!


  • Fantasy.Dreamer
    May 26, 2008

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    YAY!!!!

    I like this poem! jeje
    It has a lot of romance involved in it!

    Best of luck in the contest Gio!
    ♥♥♥♥


  • Technicolor
    May 24, 2008
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    Hmm.. I like some of Good Charlotte. I should go download that song now..

    "Looking for something to patch them up again
    To sew them back together" Very good key lines. I have to say though, your lack of punctuation and simple wording leave me.. apathetic. Good job though. And Good luck!!