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How it is

Nothing
Inside nor out
Left with lies,

Disease,

  And doubt

Festered within,

Rotting from the core
Secrets, deception
    lies and more...

I think it's time I showed you the door.

As always, constructive comments most welcome, honest opinions please.

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  • Lexie
    August 9, 2008

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    you want my honest opinion, well here it is, i really love your work. it is great!
    i loved these lines here a lot.

    Nothing
    Inside nor out
    Left with lies,

    Disease,

    And doubt

    it was a great way to open up this poem. loved it. way to go at writing this poem!