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Sirenity

His house was their location
To her is was vacation
laying in his bed
every word he said
was unfamiliar to her ear
but yet it calmed all her fear
she never wanted to let go
she wanted him to know
how much she really loved him

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  • whits end silver member
    May 24, 2008

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    This is quite insightful of thoughts going on in a woman in love. Her thoughts of "Sirenity".......
    Well written!!