Does not mean that this
Salmon did not try to swim
Back up the river.
It just means that I
am not up to win the son
of the year award.
Author notes
I slept with my mom
Written December 24th, 2003
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alright - if the author's notes are true... then you're funny.
hahaah wow... you seem so deep
nice jacket in the photo by the way... really rock-star-esque -
lol
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whoa, i think i'll leave this one alone. heavy.
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i don't understand the first haiku but the second one makes more sense...wow you must be struggling with alot...happy holidays -wildchild**
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flowing
very interesting sequence...nicely understated...powerful///
it has two run-on sentences...
it works for me...good levels..juxtaposition...
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