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The Day We Meet

I can't wait for that one day
Our souls unite us two
Waiting for that special day
that I will get my hands on you

Still waiting for that day
where we will be together
awaiting that heart-felt day
Our lives will become better

I'm getting ready for that day
when I can see your smile myself,
making me realize just how much I love you
and just how lucky I am to have you

When will that day come
when I can be with you?
Uniting our hearts
we will no longer be two

Author notes

This poem's dedicated to the bestest person in the world: Sock!
Thanks to Amy and Danito for the rhyme help 'n such!

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  • XXWolfOfInsanityxX
    December 26, 2008

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    Awe. this such a sweet write I love it so much. =) and the last 2 lines are my favorite. this is such a heart warming write. Very touching =] keep up the great work

  • James823
    June 9, 2008
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    Good

    applause x 2


  • Nephlim
    May 24, 2008

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    Aww! Shuper shweet, bet Sockles loves it! Loved the finishing line! And every line before that but the finishing line was a great way to end it
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • Paril
    May 24, 2008
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    You bet. Not just someone, someone awesome

    -Paril


  • killshort
    May 24, 2008
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    YAY!!! PARIL FOUND SOMEONE


  • Dani M.paz
    May 24, 2008
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    hehe i know im good hahah nah dude but thanks for the credit
    hehe i bet kay is really happy with u


  • Suns Setting Angel
    May 23, 2008
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    Nice

    Its a good poem.


  • Sock
    May 23, 2008
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    Awww. That's so sweet. What a lucky girl

    sock


  • peridotPixi
    May 23, 2008

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    this poem turned out well, that is going to be one lucky girl i like it, thanks for posting my name in the AN's keep up the wonderful writing, -Amy


  • Babs
    May 23, 2008
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    LOVE IT


  • evilbatwoman
    May 23, 2008

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    awwwwwww
    forget her. let's get together. (jk!!!!!) I'm not sure I'm allowed to say things like that. so shhhh
    It's beautiful.

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