The world opens before me
In my eyes and in my mind
I am the seeker of treasures
And the pleasure is all mine
Though alone I’m never lonely
For all the world lays before me
When I open the book that lays
Happily upon my knee
As I open the pages
So slowly will I proceed
Though eager with anticipation
Leisurely I love to read
A contest entry
- PIF QUICKIE/IMAGE PROMPT by imahealer.
675 points, ended May 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Taking it at your own speed is certainly your own choice. It’s easy to see, you wont be rushed. Well written.
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This is absolutely beautiful and I can so relate to your poem. Inside pages we enter another world, and become immersed in the characters, and are never alone or feel lonely. This is a wonderful entry. Rhyme scheme always throws me if it is not good. Yours was perfect. Best wishes! Thank you so much for entering my contest!
Shana -
awwwwwwww such a great take on the prompt....... thank for sharing nd good luck in this contest....! hugs
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This was a pleasure to read itself!! Lovely softness about it, whilst still be very uplifting!! Gorgeous hun.
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Lovely poem
you have such a delicate way of writing, you really
use your innervoice to paint each line and verse.
Good for you, for that is the hardest part of writing
poetry!
ears/Seattle
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