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God Leads Me

I travel one day at a time
trying to find what’s worthy in my mind.
The Lord beside me, I am His forever
He will protect me and where ever I go
He walks with me.

As I travel one day at a time
up the stairway, I climb.
Sometimes stumbling through
the tears shed from my eyes
caused from another’s hatred that resides.

Flowing through my soul
like bounding ties,
preventing my sprit to fully grow.
Past memories began to flow and God takes control,
leading me one day at a time.

Blessing me and making me whole.
The father above helps me climb
the stairways of life
showing me upward, is truly the only way to go.
As I travel One day at a time.

Author notes

I always try and take it one day at a time, this song got me through tougher times.

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  • penman gold member
    June 4, 2008
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    wonderful

    Very creative and well expressed. Thank you for sharing.


  • ShelleyA
    June 3, 2008

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    A beautiful write. Heartfelt. Lovely depth of feeling. Good flow and tone. Your faith shines in this piece. Well penned and much enjoyed. Congratulations on winning Gold. Well deserved.


  • Rhyming from Rehab
    June 2, 2008

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    I believe in taking life one day at a time. God does walk beside you. Beautiful poem


  • ears2hearyou gold member
    June 1, 2008

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    I love that song!

    sometimes dear poet, our values, our beliefs touch
    other people's core issue's their hurtful wounded
    triggers....they themselves are even unaware are present.

    sometimes, too, it's how they test us...to see how we
    will respond...i have gotten a little more bolder,
    okay a whole lot more in my older age...
    and father god always touches my heart, and says,
    I brought them to your attention, because....

    they are the ones..that have no one..
    no one..
    to pray their silent words,
    for them.

    so i just let them watch me, and interestingly enough,
    they seem to learn more from when I fail, or make
    a mistake? they want to see how i'll respond.
    thus..you now know why I must trim my cussing!

    much love,
    ears/ well done dear poet, well done!


  • mattzaluski
    May 30, 2008
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    i liked this poem very much good luck in the contest


  • storiesuntold
    May 29, 2008
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    This is so true for we cant ask for more than one day at a time

    Lovely write here keep up the good work


  • Endeavor gold member
    May 29, 2008
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    Very good

    Blessing me and making me whole.
    The father above helps me climb
    the stairways of life
    showing me upward, is truly the only way to go.
    As I travel One day at a time.

    Very beautiful
    Your faith is clear in this

    Like the ending
    it comes back and rapes it up nicely

    Rick


  • Amera gold member
    May 28, 2008

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    This is beautiful and a wonderful statement of faith. I can see how we must take things "one day at a time".

    Love,
    Amera♥


  • MysticalRayne
    May 28, 2008
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    Oh this is beautiful ~ So inspirationally written... Best of luck in the contest


  • z etoile
    May 25, 2008
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    Great job very heartfelt and comes from your heart/


  • CountryCousin
    May 24, 2008

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    I know.

    I know this is true for me because of an incident that happened Thursday night. I also know that everything works out for the best. You do know how to get to the heart of the matter.

  • storiesuntold
    May 23, 2008
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    So wonderful we walk together

    Yes for if we concentrate on this one day we can have joys in abundance


  • creationsfromheart
    May 23, 2008

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    This is a great poem and I am so happy to see it is not a prewrite and it actually fits the contest good luck here!

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