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Something to Feed You

A man was starving, so he ate some food.
He found it sitting on a table, all chewed.
Not able to help it, he ate it right away,
And he only existed till the end of that day.

You see, a monster came and looked at him,
And it devoured his head and his feet and one limb!
The monster, in turn, was eaten by me,
So if you looked at me, what would you see?

You do understand, I'm not really forever,
I will sustain myself with food, or whatever,
But when you see my corpse, I do confess,
I am not human, but what am I? Guess.

Don't really guess. Is it too weird? I was feeling hyper...

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  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    May 24, 2008

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    Unusual but very quirky
    Is this a real puzzle, if so I'd love to be told the answer since I am terrible at guessing
    If not, it is interesting and fun to read


    Enjoy AllPoetry
    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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    • pomegranate
      May 27, 2008
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      srry

      i meant no need to guess.

    • pomegranate
      May 27, 2008
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      ha

      no need to reply to it, and i wrote it too quickly. i dont care about language or rhyming. i dont really like poetry all that much either. see my other poem, about a man and his pie...