Broken,
Torn.
Her wings
disintegrating into
emptinessness.
Frayed at the edges
From the battles she's fought.
And the battles she's lost.
Her life,
now a dismal gray.
A fallen angel.
Author notes
Prompt: 30 words or less, pic inspired. author: http://thetragictruth-of-me.deviantart.com/art/Like-a-little-child-17430554
exactly 30 words!!!
A contest entry
- Quickie! by liduen.
600 points, ended June 11, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please comment if you have time! I would love to know what you think of my poem! :D
Comments
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This is a great take on the pic. I love the imagery in this peice. Good luck in my contest
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Great job
great poem
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I must say first, 'disintegrating' is the correct spelling, otherwise this is a thoughtful poem, it makes one think about the nature of angels and it's very creative.
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awesome job that describes so much with so few words. We have so many fallen angels and no one willing to help them up. good job and good luck in contest.
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good
i like it alot!!!
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