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New Life

Next year came so suddenly
I tried to slow it down
To enjoy being at the top
But now its just too late
And times have changed
I will be graduating soon

All my friends have come and gone
Gotta find a way to brush my past away
Logically I'm confused
And I keep breaking down
Cause afterwards I'm going to the military

I will not admit it to anyone
But I am scared and worried
Going away from everyone will be
The hardest thing I have to do

Leaving everything
I have had to know for so long
It will be better but that means nothing

Still I must forget everything
And start anew

For the military will be my new life

Author notes

Dedicated to my friends, especially Dawn, Ashely and Davell its especially hard to leave you.

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in that picture its my sergeant and myself

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  • dreamweaver08
    June 3, 2008
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    awesome job, thanks for submitting this


  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    June 1, 2008

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    This is indeEd a heartfelt task ..touching piece and bringing the depth of the sentiments in each word here..well done...


  • Artemis De Winter
    May 27, 2008

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    Aww! i agree with DreamerOfRoses. that line IS especially moving! promise that you'll come back in one piece! or i'll be so mad!
    when are you leaving???? i'm really gonna miss you, ya know?


  • DreamerOfRoses
    May 26, 2008

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    Ohh. =[
    That's so sad. The line "It will be better but that means nothing" is especially moving.
    You'll make it, though. As much as you're scared or worried, you will make it.


  • fallenangel671
    May 25, 2008

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    Amazing write and I'm working on the letter sit I promise and good luck in the military and promise me you'll come back in one piece.
    Im gunna miss you

    ~Ashley~<3

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