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we are going to be friends

I found her
she was lying on the ground
I asked, what are you doing girl?
but no answers were found

later that day
she was back from the hospital
she told me she wanted to go away
she wanted to stop rising and tried to fall

she took an overdose
after she noticed that the blood dried up
but this ain't the time for her to go
so I said, c'mon girl, join the club

we're all misfits
because we failed the suicide thing
but we should be lucky to be alive
so we can be happy and sing
sing along with the razor that stings

every morning
there's blood everywhere
outside the rain is pouring
so are our tears, but life isn't fair

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  • broken-angel
    May 28, 2008
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    wow, amazing hun...keep it up xx


  • just-alittle-emo
    May 23, 2008

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    nice, Rymes started good but fell. but it was nice, I know how that feels, failed suicide attempts. Godd luck and I enjoyed reading!