When you where young, like me
Just opened your eyes to reality
Thinking you can get it all
If you just believed in more
All those dream and goals
All the planing in your youth
Am sure you didnt become the superman you ought
All the things you left behind to rot
Was it giving up or growing up?
A contest entry
- Go Ahead, Ask Me Anything by PureCountry.
525 points, ended June 16, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
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Comments
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very well written
( i kept my word in stalking ya work )
lol....dont be scared
a beauitful write
its short, but perfect just the way it is
thanku for sharin!!
addie
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Excellent
A very fine write, indeed. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. I liked it just the way it is, again well done. -
Wonderfully Put,
and simplistically strong.
It is always growing up. For to give up is to cease in living, if no where else but in spirit. Once your spirit is dead, you are of no value to anyone. Never give up upon yourself or another.
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