Staring out the window
with a scar
that will never fade..
Tears running down
my cheeks
which will never stop
Through all this misery
I sense the memories
swinging by,
like the tree oustide
when a strong wind is blowing
Watched the news
they said the forcast was,
going to be rain
but it has already started pouring down
in my heart
with the forcast told
by my brain
Having to walk
on an unending alley way
through a path of thorns
through a path filled with pain
hurts so bad
that it makes wish that atleast
hell should be better than this
A contest entry
- Emotions - author's choice by fatality-rhymed77.
600 points, ended June 1, 2008, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Just a little something..what you guys think?
Comments
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Spellcheck - staring, not starring. Other than that it was a truly unique piece. I haven't really seen this style before so you definately have my attention. Thank you so much for sharing this with me.
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oops thank you very much I didn't realise it myself but am glad you liked it
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