Seeping through the glass,
Lasting one more time,
One more chance,
Bleeding through the hand,
I just need a place to land,
Don't let me sink in the sand,
I won't bother you here,
I will help you wish,
Help you within the wall.
Must you go now?
Of all times,
I need it now.
Looking up from the ground,
I quake with pain and fear,
Please let me near
Author notes
A quick write. ~ 1:44pm, 5/23/08
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370 points, ended May 27, 2008, 10 entries
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Comments
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This is really descriptive. I like it. You know, sometimes the lines in poems don't need commas or question marks or periods at the end. They can be left blank!
I like this poem and I'm looking forward to more!
Peace Out,
~Erin
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