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in the end it wasn't easy




Bearded dragons
who used to breathe fire
and tell thousands of terrible jokes
now just sit in their wheelchairs
inhaling ugly linens
busy smothering everything
the underpaid seamstress
tucks neatly into submission
the way someone else will
once the overpriced coffins arrive
knocking at the door
the way good intentions never did.
So I'm sorry if you didn't think it was funny
as you laughed at me
instead of my silly play on words
but I don't have time to care
whether or not I'm succeeding
by the standards of others
because for me at least
they'll remember
I'm the one who tried.

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but it wasn't easy in the beginning or the middle either...

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  • eltortedequeso
    May 24, 2008

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    OK, so I re-read the poem and now it makes sense! haha, go figure. Love the first stanza for the imagery and metaphor and the second stanza for the point of view. A nice little switch that packs so much into it! Great job sweetie!
  • thegoldenpath
    May 23, 2008

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    I love the symbolism. keep doing what you believe in and you will always to be able to stand above the masses. thank you for the poem.