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cute and sweet

DAy by day I long for her
Day by day I need her
She is my charm
I wrap her with my arms
I long to talk with her
I love to walk with her
She is the star in the sky
When she is gone I die
I love her above all
When she leaves I fall

      love,
          kevin

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this is a poem written by my boyfrend kevin he is so sweet and this poem just shows some of it

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  • peridotPixi
    August 13, 2008

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    this is a cute poem from a boyfriend, let him know that your momma says he has a lot of writing potential
    ɛiɜ ~Amy