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Drip Down

[Verse 1]
You watched me do this
Over all these years,
And still you've done nothing
To console any of my fears.
And if I've never really mattered,
Why waste lies in saying you care?
I'm falling apart,
But I'm still sitting here

[Chorus]
Watching the blood
Drip down
Drip down
Drip down
Watching it all
Drip down
Drip down
Drip down

[Verse 2]
I'm afraid I might be worthless
If I mean nothing to you.
If you're so ashamed of me,
Then, Baby, I'm ashamed of me too.
I'm falling apart,
But I'm still sitting here

[Chorus]
Watching the blood
Drip down
Drip down
Drip down
Watching it all
Drip down
Drip down
Drip down

[Bridge]
It's like I'm breathing underwater,
It's like the sky is falling down;
And what will be left of me
If all I can do is drown...
Drown in me,
Drown in you,
Nothing left
We can do...
To save....
Me....

Now that I'm

[Chorus]
Watching the blood
Drip down
Drip down
Drip down
Watching it all
Drip down
Drip down
Drip down
[Repeat x2]

Watcing the blood
Drip down
Watching it all
Drip down

Letting go...

Author notes

I made it up while in the shower!!! ^_^ Well, most of it anyways.....sortta....yeah.....

Uhh...working on this a bit more. Not sure if it's really finished. Not sure if I even like it all that much. =\

Any comments? Ideas? Something? Anything?

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Comments


  • Babs
    May 23, 2008
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    oo ican help u make d music for it if uwan


  • Babs
    May 23, 2008
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    ilove it!!..its rllyy gd


  • black-tears
    May 23, 2008

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    hahaha I like the part:
    It's like I'm breathing underwater,
    It's like the sky is falling down;
    And what will be left of me
    If all I can do is drown...

    because you made this up in the shower but I like the rest too!! it's beautiful! keep on writing!