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[ holy crap!! ]

holy crap!!
I finally understand why
I think about you all the time
&& I miss you like nothing else when your away;
honey you're what makes my world go round(:


I should've known when I first saw you in my dreams
&& how the world lit up when you were around
I should've seen the way my eyes would brighten
&& how my smile just felt so much bigger
I should've payed more attention to my cousins hints
but now its too late
I just realized that,

 

I've fallen head over heels in love with you!

 

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hehehehehe ^_^ that was fun to write!

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  • pancake
    June 16

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    AWWWWW. That was so sweet. glad you had fun writing it. it made me smile. YEYEYEYEY. it was so nice and short and sweet and generally perfect..
    yey


  • ERbby silver member
    June 6

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    haha i am glade you had a good time writen this one
    i had a great time reading it!
    such a great poem doll i love it mucho its crazy how you fianally are able to see things clear but then its to late i hate that fact of life though but oih well love mucho!

    xoxox

    endless

  • ikeiloveyou
    June 2
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    hah i love this sooo much!! it was just awesome!! your such a writer girl!!

  • sinnocence
    May 30
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    Awww this poem is so cute!


  • imyoursforthetaking
    May 26

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    Yea....it's a nice feeling right?? but why is it to late? why does time have to get in the way of fate??
  • Eternal Night
    May 25

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    A beautiful piece of work

    I 100% absolutely love it. You really capture the splendor of being in love. You are a very talented writer. Keep up the good work!

    Meh

    Chris H.

    PS: just out of curiosity, is this about someone in particular?

  • Lovebecomesus
    May 24
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    I really like this one! The joys of being in love! gotta luv it! Greta write!


  • broken-angel
    May 24
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    awww this is sweet....keep it up hunnie xxx

  • SummerHasGone
    May 23

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    aaaaawwwwwww this is so cute! *sigh* the beauty of first love this is a nice little example of a beautiful epiphany....good write!

  • Eos Astraia Nyktos
    May 23
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    Ahh, I forgot the clappy guys.


  • Eos Astraia Nyktos
    May 23

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    This is cute. I love reading about falling in love, since I've yet to find it. It's nice to know that some are capable of finding it. My favorite part is:
    "I should've known when I first saw you in my dreams
    && how the world lit up when you were around"
    Amazing write.

  • GoodKnightPoet
    May 23

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    What do you understand about why you think of him all of the time. I like this poem, just watch your head and don't let your heals kick you.


  • coffeeangel316
    May 23

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    Love is sweet and then sometimes hard but this is a great job. I enjoyed reading it. what a wonderful poem.


  • XNevermindX
    May 23
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    Yes! Now thats more like it...^_^

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