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Merely words

Sighs whispered
Kisses feathered
Passions released
Lust unbridled

Moans louder
Touch trembled
Nerves jangled
Skin tightened

Want escalated
Need unleashed
Hearts thundered
Patience vanished

Body arched
Fingers grasped
Sheets crumpled
Sighs screamed


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  • reeseXtheXsoldier
    May 23, 2008

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    ehhh.

    this is ok. it's not great, but it's good.You could use a few diffrent words, but that passion stands out! Keep it up! KUDOS!


  • sanity
    May 23, 2008

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    this is lovely..... passionate... short lines reverberating the quickness of pace that love making takes... thanx for sharing hugs and love Linda xxxxxxxxxxx