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How Timmy Died

Here lies the body of poor ol' Tim
Well, what's left of him
You see, he fell into the wood chipper
And all we found was a fuzzy pink slipper

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Heh heh heh, my boyfriend wears fuzzy pink slippers!

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  • Croc of the Void
    October 15, 2008

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    Are your...Well I gotta look at your name. MENTAL terrorist Well nice poem. Good way of killing some1.


    • Toxic Stardust
      October 16, 2008
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      you need to read the other 2 I wrote... "Poor Eara Mae" and "Weed doesn't kill, windows do" They're about Noel and Treavor


  • XxForeverFaithfulxX
    June 7, 2008

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    HAH

    Li-Li you need to put the words in pink to match the slipper!^_^ It's awsome!Love you! Love Kay-Kay.


  • Parearoo
    May 23, 2008

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    Brilliant! Very good job! "all we found was a fuzzy pink slipper.' Oh, what a way to be remembered! Great poem!