Kelle Marie,
My little child, I see you there
On bended knees crying out in prayer
With wings, you should soar in the air
Yet, you have fallen down on the sand
So, my child rise up, take my strong hand
Let me show you what I have planned
I know your sorrows and your lost dreams
I hear your nighttime cries and daytime screams
Let me nourish your soul with overflowing streams
Come to me and fill your heart with love
Let my spirit of grace fall on your soul like a dove
Look not to the ground below, but to my dwelling above
All who trusted in my name who have gone before
Are with me now and have learned to soar
They are cheering you to rise above the sandy floor
Come, my child and fly with me to the sky
Do not hold onto and believe my adversaries' lie
All who know me are meant to live not to die
All my love from heaven above,
Your Daddy who is near and who always hears
In a list
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt/I'm having a rough time so I need uplifting poems please! by stavykm.
800 points, ended May 24, 2008, 19 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is just so beautiful..
It was just so soft and sweet.. it really
tugs at the heart..
I loved the imagery here and also
The love and peace in your words as well..
You did a wonderful job.. really brought
a smile to this cold heart.
Best of luck and thank you for sharing
something so wonderful..
Angel
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This Is So Beautiful
What a precious poem. It is written so softly and full of Gods loving grace upon an innocent broken child, ME,
I know your sorrows and your lost dreams
I hear your nighttime cries and daytime screams
Let me nourish your soul with overflowing streams
Such great imagery throughout this poem. You met me in my pain and brought me to God with his Fatherly love. Thank you for entering this beautiful poem and best of luck in the contest.
Many Blessings
God Bless
Kelle Marie
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This Is Precious!!!!!!!!!!
I am so glad others on here are in tune with Kelle's need right now. You have penned such a precious piece for her comforting her and reminding her of our Lord's love and the fact the he will not abandon her in her darkest hour. Your rhymes were very nice and the poem tied in nicely with the photo as well. Thanks for sharing and for being there with your kind words for Kelle she is just a precious lady!!!~~Toni~~
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BRAVO! BRAVO!
wise loving words from the Creator of the Sea's.
Filling us with power and strength to withstand
the mighty waves that occassionally are not so merciful
to our souls!
well done, feast of a poem to strengthen and give hope!
ears/Seattle
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