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Maria's Outta Quarters

The basket was heavy, long overdue for emptying.
Maria, Maria, Maria...

The DA with his wide shoulders snuck up behind.
Maria, Maria, Marea...

With no resistance, he broke the first rule on the list.
With creeping hands, the innocence is quickly dispelled.
With tender lips, the Tide falls and no one bothers.
Maria, Maria, Maria...

Author notes

This is just what the picture made me think of. Heaven isn't the place you go when you die, but the moment in life that... I forgot the rest, SORRY! I did read the rules though!

I guess it'd be either prompt 2 or maybe 3.

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  • Super short & interesting. Quite different, too!


  • Iridessa MoonFlower
    October 6, 2008

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    Wow! I love your take on these pictures. Wonderful story to go with it. Nice visuals. Thank you for entering. Good luck in my contest. ~~Iridessa MoonFlower~~


  • EvenStarsBreak--x
    September 22, 2008

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    Quite an interesting write, nicely written. =] Thank you for the entry, Good luck.

    x-Pretty-Odd-x <3


  • Angelflower
    May 25, 2008
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    This was really interesting..
    Thank you very much for sharing this..
    Best of luck..

    Angel