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On the Fiddle

Opening this box I found, to my surprise,
a girl inside played fiddle with expertise.
so good was she the world announced: "She rocks!"
and not to worry about her stripey socks.

I mentioned her playing of the fiddle
but wondered where and how she'd tiddle
when nature called all unexpected
to catch her short and disaffected.

"Not to worry," the watchers said,
"Keep her well away from any bed
of dandelions whose diuretic tones
might cause her pain and many groans."


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  • myrataal silver member
    May 24
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    Clever ...

    and naughty word play, very creative yes, weird.



    Thank you for reading my work. I truly appreciate it, as you know.

    Love
    Myra

    • And I only got an Honourable out of 9 participants. Boohoo!!! Luv u2 as they say these days.
      Donald
  • Aww what a lovely piece you have penned here. I enjoy the touch of humour displayed here Very creative and originally crafted! Thank you so much for entering & best of luck in my contest