Ding,dong the bells they ring,
it was so great i wanted to sing,
A pile 'o presents,
about 1002,
i wish i new what was happening but i had no clue,
but then my shadow was covered by a bigger one,
i turned around with my face in the sun,
A CAKE!,
yes a cake i just wanted to eat,
I was swept off my feet,
then i look up high to the peak of the cake,
when millions of people poped out and shouted something in way,
i couldnt understand then they went out and said,
"HAPPY BIRTHDAY FROM YOUR BROTHER FRED"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A contest entry
- Happy Birthday Michellemybelle!!!!! by SummerlandRayne.
479 points, ended June 4, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
i wanted 1 like this
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ah, very cute poem! thanks for joining in my birthday celebration.
blessings,
Michelle
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AGAIN LOL!
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i like the begining of this poem the most mainl because it attomatically sucke dyou into the whoell poem and made you want to read threst. very very good poem. loved it.
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great poem
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How sweet! Thank you so much!
Az -
Very good. I'm sure they'll appreciate this.
Good luck in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Brian
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