With a wave of her hand
She gives me flight
With a wave of her hand
She turns day into night
She's in command
Of the wind, mountains and sea
She's in command
Defining the essence of me
I have no desire to escape
From her beguiling spell
Where can you find her
I'll never tell
A contest entry
- Short Poems About Anything (PW welcome) by Intricate Wordsmith.
550 points, ended May 28, 2008, 54 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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This is a good write. I like the "short but sweet" type of poetry; and this one definitely fits that bill. I like that the title adds a dimension to the poem. It helps the reader to know what you are getting at. I love the repetition in the first two stanzas. It's done just right.
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This is so beautiful! Love this poem so much! I can just imagine this, a young girl turning day into night. Great job!
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Well done, my friend! Such a lovely write!!! Thanks for sharing such a graceful poem...May you be blessed
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well
I think if you or anybody found one as lovely that the secret must be kept as the love only grows. A write that made me smile
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