Its a little bit funny you are 18 today,
Now you are of legal age,
Don't drink too many brain cells away,
For you the journey, has only just begun,
Enjoy being 18 while you can,
The next big one is 21.
If I was a sculptor, then again no,
As the one of you is perfect, and not a two man show,
I know it's not much but it's the best I can do,
My gift it this rewritten song, I wrote just for you.
And Ebonie you tell everybody this is your birthday song,
When you are at your party sing, get your friend's to sing along,
I hope you don't mind, I hope you don't mind,
I wrote you this song,
please excuse me if the spelling is all totally wong.
I sat on my roof top screaming happy birthday Ebonie,
I am going to jail now, should see me in six months
Or maybe three,
Its a little bit scary telling the prisoners,
What I am in here for
I met a nice man name Bubber,
Who calls me his whore.
So excuse me for forgetting the freedom of outside,
Shit Bubber calls time to run and hide,
Anyway the thing is what I really mean,
believe me when I say,
I regret nothing I have done,
For your 18th birthday.
And Ebonie you tell everybody this is your birthday song,
When you are at your party sing, get your friend's to sing along,
I hope you don't mind, I hope you don't mind,
I wrote you this song,
please excuse me if the spelling is all totally wong.
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lol this is so so clever a really nice tight cleverly constructed stroke of genius, nice writye my friend
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Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. . .
ThAt Is So sWeEt....I LoVeD It....ThE GaL ThAt yOu wRoTe ThIs fOr iS ReAlLy lUcKy....nYcE pIeCe
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awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!
babe i love it!!! and you know its my favourite song!!
aww this is seriously the best thing anyone has ever done for me, and the best birthday present i could ask for! thank you so much! you are amazing, i love it
now all i need is ewan to sing it to me... lol
awww thanks so much babe, this is amazing, i love it
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Just fabulous hun!
♥
Stay safe
Love ya
~Manda
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thats an awesome song poemy!! love it and it is kinda fun
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Thats great! Really good! It's nice to get a poem/song on your b-day as its so much more personal.
I hope they like it, and has a good day!!
Sunny
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Great tribute and story line to go along with it. There is a wonderful sense of devotion to Ebonie in this write and it shows the love of a heart in full. Your a pure, flat out writter James, and a damn good one at that.
good day mate.
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I meant to give you applause then!
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Awww I think writing a poem/song is a lot more thoughtful than buying something and I'm sure your friend will be proud to call this her song
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First verse; third line:: too, not to.
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