Lost in the may sun,
apricots glow
reminds me of an ending.
Closing my eyes,
ending this chapter.
God, is this sunset
an end to my past?
Or enrichment
to my future?
Pondering his destiny
at hand.
I can not be sad
as one day, passes
into night.
For tomorrow
His love brings
new life.
Fully emerged, my eyes
look at the horizon.
Reminding me
how small I really am.
When bowed before
my God.
His will close
one page.
Only to wake,
finding myself
new passages of life.
You Lord, in full control.
Teaching me there's beauty
in my breakings.
Opening my heart
to find new love.
In the Potters hands...
Author notes
Sometime as God closes one day, We find He begins a new morning.
A contest entry
- a reminder of HIS control... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 5, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
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So beautiful!
love,
Conni -
This is such a BEAUTIFUL reminder of how our gracious Heavenly Father really IS in control of our lives if we are saved by Jesus Christ! Nicely written!
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Beautifully written. It's easy to write when we let the spirit be our muse and don't hold back. Congrats on the silver!
I added you as well to my favs,
She-ra
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I absolutely, positively, no doubt about it..LOVE this write. It is just simply beautiful and touching.
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Bravo
Wow...this was so touching!*tears* I loved it...it has really strong emotion and lots and lots of love!^_^ I can tell this came from you heart...I'm glad I got to read your amazing work! Keep up the good work! Thanks for entering and good luck!^_^
Love always,
In Christ,
~Kayla~
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"Teaching me there's beauty
in my breakings."
I adore that part. This was beautifully written. -
Congrats on winning silver!
My favorite part of this poem:
You Lord, in full control.
Teaching me there's beauty
in my breakings.
Opening my heart
to find new love.
In the Potters hands...
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Congrats Lisa on your well deserved silver. This is beautiful in imagery, thoughts and words. I often think of these things as I look to the sky also, but you described it all so perfectly!
blessings,
Michelle
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You got Silver!
Congrats Baby!!! This really is a beautiful write!
Your Xianaria
~ Tim -
A soft and glowing testiment to your faith Sis! {I love the pic you chose for this...beautiful!!!}
Love You~
Sue
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my daughter liked your font and I your soft tones mor
you qualify your sayings delicately
the first stanza was shimmering with welcoming some endings, like when something's done to eat... or a segment for contemplation.
thus, a direct attentuation or one for attention with the means. it reminds me how night night is an opportunity for a tune, operatic rest on the cornerstone of humbleness.
but you display the main denominator of moved time with his works is "his love" and I our recognition assessing it to know to ask more within that not out of purpose's orbit per se. but restoration of our cracks is by abiding by repair mechanisms from sleep to seeking properly and you have examples "Fully emerged, my eyes
look at the horizon." provisions are by "pages" so to speak and justifiably for depth as "Teaching me there's beauty
in my breakings."
Daily need dealt with can be duly appreciated for what's next,
babies are my subject
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Beautiful~
I truly love how you worded with breathless wonderment and amazement at the how God works in your life and what He has prepared for you. A beautiful write, very well done.
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Beautifully expressed. Your ending is stellar! I also love these lines...
"For tomorrow
His love brings
new life."
It's always there..we just have to see it!!
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And so we pass our lifetimes a way seeking to learn the lessons that come our way. We always have the choice to seek the silver linings or to simply accept the pain it is our choice and we choose it and are responsible for it all the same. Do not swear by the Divine, for we can not make God responsible for our lives. We can only make ourselves responsible to God for the way we live them
Enough, I wander astray. Beautifully written good use of metaphor. I think it should be He will close/one page ... But that is a minor point.
Love, Tom B.
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Well ..I submit my thanks for the space reserved by you in my contest...
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I am done lol didnt know ifyou seen it or not MR.P
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