I smiled for you
through blurred, teary eyes
hoping you would not see
the pain I hid within.
You saw me as strong,
and I wanted you
to remember me that way
regardless of the truth.
Suffering is not a pretty thing,
and you saw what you wanted
of the auntie you loved so much,
and that's what I gave you.
I will soon see that bright light
as the Door is open for me,
and you will pray for me
as I cross over into my eternal life.
Please don't cry for me;
I will soon be finished
with the pain and the anguish
of this life and this world.
Rejoice for me, my beautiful ones
and remember me with love.
A contest entry
- A Prayer For The Dying by CatherineL.
1600 points, ended June 9, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So wonderful this is
Excellent write here and your page and work is beyond words .I am so glad you joined us here and hope we all can give love life and faith to each other forever more
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Such beautiful heartfelt poetry that brings tears yet hope also. Lovely compassionate piece you have penned here Patricia!!
All my best to you!!
Linda
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This is a prayer I can relate to very closely. Watching someone close to me pass on is without a doubt the most difficult emotional trauma I've ever experienced. Your message and thoughtfulness should be well received. Best wishes in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Beautiful
This really is beautiful, but I havent seen her for nearly a year and i'm not gonna see her again, coz ive been over the other side of the world since last August. Thanks for the entry and good luck xxx
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I have made the decision not to go to my mother's funeral for reasons I need not share with others, so I do understand. My mother is fine with it, and I know that you love your Auntie very much and will be praying for her as her life here on earth ends. God bless her, you and your family in this time of sorrow. Patricia
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