Top of the world?
Perhaps not,
looking down...
I see the land lay,
green grass,
valleys,
mountains,
lakes.
I am truly high,
the air is thin.
I am in a rush,
greater
than chemicals
can induce.
Alive, pumping.
Enjoying life.
Author notes
Contest entry, inspired by picture prompt: http://allpoetry.com/contest/2406457
A contest entry
- PIF PHOTO PROMPT - #82- CLOSE SOON ...LOL ..40 WORDS by Roaddog Wolf.
700 points, ended May 23, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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That contest photo is scary...not a fan of heights where I don't have something strong tied to my waist to keep me from falling, lol
The poem does the photo justice, better than that, it improves upon the photo, gives it even more beauty. There isn't many things (free, that is
) in life that can get you high like nature, at least when your mind is attune to it.
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oh so true. beautiful write!
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I like the positive view(no pin intended) good write
...Thank you for entering and good luck in the judging
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No pun indeed
Thanks, glad you liked it.
G
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I LIKE THE DETAILS AND STUFF YOU INCLUDED IN THE POEM. IT WAS VERY VIVID AND THE READER COULD PLACE THEMSELVES IN THE NARRATORS SPOT.
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Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.
When the reader sees, truly sees what the narrator tries to describe one can be satisfied.
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