Sometimes we take ourselves
to be movers and shakers.
When we are probably more
robbers and takers.
We think ourselves to be
so very much in control
This thinking is deadly
contaminates the soul.
Alone our thoughts flutter
into grandiose attire.
While falling into the
temptation of asking 'why'?
Needless to say the moment
finally, does arrive.
When we get a clear view
Who is He, and who are you?
This beggers description
as it is so painfully plain
to see, that I'm no God
and He's no me. So wrapped...
Into this picture, I get some
relief, for if I ain't the 'it'
then I don't have to do a bit.
He'll see that the sun shines...
Arrange my thoughts within my mind.
Cause my heartstrings to mature,
just a few of the things, on the tour.
I just hang and look demure.
Author notes
Every sun set, is a reminder of HIS control...Unknown
This quote is a prompt.
A contest entry
- a reminder of HIS control... by PrabhuDayal Khattar.
300 points, ended June 5, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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you are very true while describing HIS worth my friend..my thanks for sharing such a wonderful piece..well done..
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thanks, my lovable Ian, for this review lol
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I liked this very much! Your words speaks volumes in a fun poem!
I enjoyed the read and your knowing whos in charge.
Best wishes,
Lifetime
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Thanks so much, I appreciate lol
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