Here lies a dirty hooker
Filth and fame, it was taken from her
Men and ladies, money and pills
Hooker lived her life for thrills
Trashy pornos, STD's
Captivated her life, until she was six feet deep
Author notes
option: 11) a hooker
Pic Credit: http://wytchinghour.deviantart.com/art/Headstones-10317351
A contest entry
- Headstones!! by Parearoo.
450 points, ended May 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Hookers have feelings too...Beautiful work here. I like the picture. You did a really good job with this one.
Warmest,
Mylee -
Nicely done, I really like your semi-rhymes. To me they count as real rhymes and I often use them - it annoys purists it seems, but I don't care and it's good to see you don't either. Nice little headstone inscription - good luck in the contest x
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Very intresting! I love how it was all the negative/"fun" things in her life that did her in! Over all, a great poem that made me smile a bit! Good job!
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O.o How sad..at first I thought the poem was going to be trashy and then I read it, it's actually very nice. The way you worded it made it go from skanky to sophisticated Nice write!
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