I had a dream
you were here again
giving me your lovely words
promises of endless love.
It was so real.
It was only a dream,
a beautiful and delightful dream
faded in the silence.
I've woken up...
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Dreams always give me a positive idea for tomorrow, even when realisation of the dream is impossible. Lovely poem, just a hint of sadness at waking.
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Dreams can take us to where ever our heart longs to be
Making the imposible, posible
Nicely done
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Marvellous poem of a dream (I had a dream ) , it was so real that seemed that life and dreams almost confound themselves in reality. But alas! " it was really a dream even if beautiful and delightful , but only a dream that destroys the promises of endless love. A profound kiss of admiration for my dear friend - poet Maria Gioia from John alias Marvin.
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Oh, this is sad. Dreams seem to mock us at times, with their visions of a perfect world that we must leave behind when we wake.
Yet somehow, they also show us how things could be; set a standard, as it were, for our strivings.
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I liked it very much Jasmine . There is sadness in your poem and our poems alas! are nourished also of dreams that make part of our Life. Anyway , very beautiful for who partakes to the beauty and the dreams of Love. A hug to you my dear Jasmine. Marvins
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A pity to wake up from such a dream, a very loverly worded poem.
The words so very touching, endless love in promises.
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Beautiful... your words carry me away on a flight of fancy. Dream on sweet poetress!
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