Please tell me what to do-
I've fallen in love with you
I'm being honest, being true
and I want to know
If.
You love me, too.
Didn't you know it, babe
by the way I touch
that my kisses weren't just kisses
a lot they meant, oh much
they meant to me
to you. to us.
Tears fall down my face
and you ask what's the fuss…
It's just…
I love you
and I cant find the words to say
that it's growing each and every single day
I wish you were here every minute
I never thought that I'd be in it
but I am.
I am.
. .
babe…
tell me what to do…
for I, have fallen in love with you.
hit it.
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Excellent
I want to thank you because you have giving me the courage to be able to express myself to my man. It has not been easy, but you have made it alot easier by expressing yourself.
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geeze, you're welcome
. i didn't know i could have an impact on anyone by just writing poems that mean something to me. it means a lot- really
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This is a very romantic write. I like the simple but powerful word choice, and the loose but smooth rhyming structure. This one makes old fogeys like me hearken to a simpler time, when the innocence of youth meets the unstoppable torrent of eternity.
Thanks.
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Thank you, thank you!. I actually have another version of this poem... that I like better- but I think that I will keep this version here & my other one on my myspace lol. idk what that has to do with anything, other than to inform you that I have another version.
Anyway, thank you much for your comment..
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