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Gaara

If I were yours and you were mine
We could share all of time
We'd build sand castles every day
We'd be together no matter what they say
But you aren't real
And its odd how I feel

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  • Midgetbridgey
    May 28, 2008
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    I will comment after the contest finishes
    Best of Luck


  • The Girl In ME
    May 23, 2008

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    oh my god you actually made a poem for a chartcer (can't spell) lol lol lol i can't believe you sissy
    - lil sissy nessa