dazzling stars
in the dark of night
whisper soft sad news
in subtle literature
as if they've
always known
A contest entry
- PIF contest by Lavender Butterfly. by Lavender Butterfly.
500 points, ended May 23, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Best Prewrites From May 2008 by amaranthine lover.
900 points, ended July 1, 2008, 48 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This line is really the best part of the whole piece: "in subtle literature" where did you get the idea to come up with that?
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I am not too sure myself
must be the crazy studying 
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Highly imaginitive take on the prompt and your words flow softly across the page. Fabulous! best of luck in the contest!
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How beautifully expressive and vividly detailed. This has such emotion attached to it and your words are like silk... x
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beautifully written!
Best wishes in the contest
Lynda
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