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Black Pond

feathers grey
saves the ripple
as it sighs
the swan in black water
descends
to reach a quiet haven
free from flight-

to let her neck rise
as she plummets.

 

 

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i really liked my thoughts on this, but my writing does not do it justice.

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  • Melissa Gayle gold member
    June 1, 2008
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    This is serene and quite beautiful.