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Two

A fist full of hair, a palm against flesh
Melting together as our bodies mesch

Teeth scraping hot skin, tongues caress lips
Nails in his back, his hands on my hips

Rythm in motion of our bodies colliding
Moisture against stiffness both inviting

Air thick with lust and passionate satisfaction
Climax settling on the others reaction

Blissful seduction combined with pleasurable pain
Faster into cataclysmic rupture over again

Pores leaking affection and approval
Bodies trembling from slow removal

His left thigh on my right
Eyes stare into the night





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  • secberm
    May 23

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    Hmmm... I'm curious on as to what this is about... At first, I thought it was the closing scene of the Flinstones, where Fred takes the cat out.

    "A fist full of hair, a hand full of flesh
    Melting into each other as our bodies mesch"

    But it isn't. The last two lines are confusing.

    "Bodies trebling from slow removal"

    That line reminds me of warming up from the cold. You know... Removal from snow. I just don't know what this is about. But I like it. It almost makes me horny. For a minute, I thought it was about sex but I think you're WAY too innocent for that.



    Write on.

    Dez


  • Galaxy2
    May 23

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    Wow...
    that was fiery
    seductive
    lustful
    charming
    hot
    tasty
    and brilliant...

    You deswerve kisses, my dear....all over!

    Galaxy2