Come and gather on my bed,
let me rub you down.
Let me gently kiss your head,
in your scent I drown.
Lay you back & love you deep,
with all the strength I own.
Then wipe away tears I weep,
from love you've always shown.
I’ll remain to be right here,
in your heart always.
For true love resides my dear,
within the prayers we’ve prayed.
Key and lock, we both need not,
for our love is rare.
In my soul, or in loves bed,
our love’s beyond compare.
So tonight I'll close my eyes,
and you will be right there.
Determined to silence cries,
with the intimate kiss we share.
In my soul we're making love,
I love you oh so much.
And you’re all I’m dreaming of,
feeling your tender touch.
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Once again, WOW...
Thanks for penning such a lovely piece with me, I think this is my favorite yet. Pinning to page lol.
I love you oh so much too my dear!!
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A very good romantic piece with sweetness running all through it--an enjoyable read
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Truly magical and beautiful are the words that flow from deep inside the souls to bring out love of passion. Simply fabulous!!!!!
Ted E
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once again beautiful To me this is like a celebration of love Very well done
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I really love this poem! It captures the true essence of passion, love, and tenderness all in one. Excellent write, keep up the good work. -
Thanks Tim....you have your own list now...
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Such a passionate poem. Full of romantic atmosphere. Brilliantly written. One of the best "romantic" poems I've read so far. Truly great. So much talent. Keep on writing.
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This is exquisite you know, it has all the hallmarks of a wonderful penning between two souls who love together unconditionally. Love, C
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So sensual and spiritual at the same time. It's like some tantric reflection, almost makes lovemaking into a meditation of the soul. Beautifully written.
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Only thing wanting is the real act, action in flesh and blood, otherwise it remains a sigh, a romantic sigh. Today it is meaningless. At best it is juvenile and sentimental. Liked it as a sentimental piece.
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Wow!! I love this. you two work really well together. IThis reeks of love, life, and the beauty of all that two people can share together. Wonderful writing!
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These collaborations seem to work well with you. I have only done a few collabs. I can't find too many people willing to write with me.
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Thanks So Much.
PassionsPromise & poeticweaver~
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Bunny worthy!
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Thanks So Much.
PassionsPromise & poeticweaver~
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You two seem to be made to write together, more and more beautiful work. Terrific stuff.
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Thanks Jeff,
You're always so kind, be blessed!
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Wow,
We seem to be on a roll tonight, and penning of love sweet love from heaven above. ~sighs~
Thanks for sharing you with me, oouuuuweeee! 
Love the time we share here in poetry land. I love ya, and I hope you feel better soon. 
Much light and peace~ 
-Timothy aka poeticweaver
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