What’s in a mother?
Now let me think
Is she all loving
Pretty in pink
Does she inspire me?
Now let’s think about that
She read all my poems
Gives me a pat on my back
Is she there in my health?
Is she there in my sorrow?
She was there yesterday
And I hope for tomorrow
Is she there with her wisdom?
Is she with her smile?
Well, she gives that look
Like I should listen awhile
Yes she has all of these things
She been there for me
And I want just say
I love her you see
So, to a mother what can you say?
Thank you for you
On your special day
Author notes
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A contest entry
- May New Members Contest by AP Greeters.
600 points, ended June 7, 2008, 44 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Welcome to Allpoetry and thank you for entering the contest
I think there are so many things about a mother that we can focus on and show that they are in words as you have done.
Welcome to allpoetry and enjoy the site
Good luck in the contest
Faerie
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The beat per line are sometimes off, but other than that, you had some very powerful and strong words here. A touching write.
Mylee -
welcome to allpoetry
well done with this one here,
and those are the two of the most important words, is thank you, we often don't say it as much as we should.
good luck in the contest.
Cheers
Grey
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Welcome To AP
Hello jogn,
Thank you are two very important words that aren't used enough.
This is a very sweet and loving dedication.
Kari,
Site Greeter
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Welcome to AllPoetry
Such a very sweet dedication, I'm sure any mother would be proud. Good luck in the contest
~Diana -
Welcome to AllPoetry
I do enjoy your final three lines as they speak the clearest truth for Mothers Day
A great write from beginning to end
♥
Enjoy AllPoetry
Thank you & Best of luck
Stay safe
~Manda
Site Greeter
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