He wastes no time
I feel him plunge deep inside me
In and out
Pulsing with perfect rhythm
I can hardly breathe
I bite his shoulder and he moans
Fingernails draw bloody tracks on his back
He moves faster
Up, down, around
He breathes heavily in my ear
I move back and forth as well
And push him deeper within me
I hold him to me so tightly
He gasps as I break skin again
He moans my name and I bite him again
He goes even faster
He sweats, soaking me with it
He comes with a loud yell
Like a rebel in battle
Again, I say
And he starts once more
Slow at first
Then faster, faster
I peak and my voice escapes me
In a violent yell
My scream caresses his name
I push back on his shoulders and he stops
I take him in my mouth and make him come again
It tastes sweet and I put him back in side me
I kiss him hard, with burning passion
Damn, I busted his lip
The blood tastes good, too
So we keep at it
He rolls over
My turn
I ride like it's the last time
So hard he can't contain his voice
A moan escapes him, urging me on
We peak simultaneously and moan together
I roll again and his tongue finds its way inside now
Oh, I moan
And push his head in
My legs spread wider of their own accord.
His face returns to mine and our tongues meet again
He pushes himself back inside
He's nearly exhausted
As am I
But we go on
One more time
Right to the top
Author notes
This is my first poem of this kind. I hope you like it!
A contest entry
- ONE OR TWO OR THREE FOR THE LADIES(extended edition :) ) by tarcus.
555 points, ended July 10, 2008, 13 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - The Largest Contest On AP!!!! by xxRainbowDawnxx.
3000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 1706 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - 2008 Summer Poetry Olympics by Kari.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - DARE TO ENTER? SEXY FUN!!! POINTS! Adults Only 18 yrs and older by WillAlwaysLove.
1200 points, ended June 28, 11 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is one hot write here my friend. i loved it from start to finish. congrats on the bronze. keep it up!
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Now that was one hell of a write! Damn! I absolutely loved it. Your words are compelling as they jump from the page. Your imagery made me smile more than once! Thank you so much for entering my contest, the best of luck to you. Blessed Be.
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Thanks. The only one thing is that you didn't put what option you picked in your an. I still enjoyed it though
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wait now I remember... I believe I was testing you on your G-PG ratings... haha...I knew I wouldn't win... just wanted to see
I hope you enjoyed anytheway!
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err.... my favorite sport... I believe it was...
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A lovely descriptive take on what turns you on I hope you have many sessions like this.
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visual: almost in front of me
Fucking hell. thats good and like some have said its not like its grottily done its done with emotion and its brilliant well done for ya first try ai!
keep at it
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thanks!
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This poem is really cool, its not like its porno either, i like the detials and the decription goes so well as does the flow of this wonderful write, keep up the great writing, -Amy
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girl you throwed off i thought i write some crazy stuff and wacky i don't have a thing on you at all but for a first time i must admit its delicious
you 
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