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Anieon

Happy now so strange is this
Painless embrace perfection holds
Safely found and holy crowned
Sanity flies a new direction

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  • crivanea silver member
    August 5, 2008
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    shortest poem i seen so far..its well penned..although its too short to see where itis going..the prob w/ this poem is that it applies to so many things..every line seems to be written for gernality..nothing is unique..nothing is individual..i like the piece..but i think u can add more to this..good luck in the contest