Darkness follows
Dwelling within shadows
Creeping into minds
Ecstasy,
As I slowly bleed
Remind me why I’m alive
Remind me why I try
Sadness mourns
Seeing the tear stains
And all the left over remains
Remind me why I’m alive
Remind me why I try
Soothing shadows call to me
They bring no mercy
Killing sanity
Remind me why I’m alive
Remind me why I try
See the victims of the past
One by one they put on their masks
Hiding their true identity
Remind me why I’m alive
Remind me why I try
Ecstasy,
As I slowly bleed
And then the darkness comes
No longer in shadows
But within me.
Author notes
im not sure what its bout but i think it might be a song i like it,wrote it in science...its also option number 7
A contest entry
- Options Contest by Simply Simple.
1000 points, ended June 7, 2008, 83 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Dark PW's by RX-Queen.
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very nice i love it
and who dosent write poetry in science??
its the most dullest subject like ever created
this is coming from someone who wants it to be a job one day lol
keep up the awsome work your great!!! -
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thanks for the comment
but really i should pay attention in science lol
im glad u like it though
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Oooooh. I kind of like it. It seemed almost borderline emo in places, but never too bad. Thanks for entering, this was great. Best of luck in the contest.
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sad so sad indeed when i read i really felt the bitter pain in my heart
oh nice that you wrote in during science class and not at home before asleep i would have really be worried about you now:S this write tears up the heartt its an amazing write but i hope just a write thanks for sharing
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This is truly so sad.. It broke my heart reading..
I found it to be a dark write with provoking thoughts. I am glad to know that it is just a "write" and not what you are truly going through.
Stay well..
Soulful Woman
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there is plenty of familiar pain here.........especially in the "Remind me why I'm alive, remind me why I try" this I know way too well
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