not that we both don't smoke
nor drink
but this poem,
the fact that we stay awake at night
and make love
to each other
like poem to poet:
mind
full
A contest entry
- 30 words by Melissa Gayle.
500 points, ended June 1, 2008, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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mindful
very interesting poem. I stay up late and wake my mate. So I can some what identify with you. Especially when I drink. It was a pleasure to read. Ain't love grand?
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A brilliant write. You deserved the gold!
-Neha
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Excellent, no other words!!
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oh, I love the thought of poems making love to the poet...they really do...and this is gorgeous..I'd take out the but in L4..just a suggestion
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edited. thanks
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Loving the edges of the moon...
So enchanting, special
human in space and the space
here below, touching ground
guiding the pen
stroking each word
of night verses...
the moon, yes
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a love affair with the moon? Hmmmmmmm i see a howl in this one
and i just love the poetry in this
(hey what do i call you now...lori?)
This is lovely!
~ Nicolette
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ummm...call me i dunno; lori, yeah, lol lori.
thanks
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