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Endless Sky

Poured from the comfort; an endless sky
drench its stars wet in the moonlight, while dim
evil that ponders in shutters black.

 
 
 

 

 
 
 

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  • Piccola gold member
    August 13

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    Unique form, I've heard of it but never seen it until now. It is beautiful but as to the form I have no idea and cannot critique
    • kendhal22 gold member
      August 14
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      thank u

      thank u for commenting for my short poem. Basically a pixiku is any length syallable, but in three lines. Like a free verse form.

  • written-in-ink silver member
    August 13
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    i love it!!!

    "drench its stars wet in the moonlight"
    that was my favorite line

  • crazymomma
    July 7
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    This was just lovely. well written and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing
    • kendhal22 gold member
      July 7
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. Kendhal22

  • Samplette gold member
    May 29

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    A very well written pixiku. A powerful few words. Thank you so much for entering my contest. I enjoyed.
    Sam
    • kendhal22 gold member
      May 29
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful comments given ti pixiku. Kendhal22
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