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Endless Sky

Poured from the comfort; an endless sky
drench its stars wet in the moonlight, while dim
evil that ponders in shutters black.

 
 
 

 

 
 
 

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  • Mythtress
    December 19, 2008

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    A pixiku? I haven't read but one or two..but this one seems to be a good one. Great imagery.
    Write on, poet.

    Blessings,
    Myth

    • kendhal22
      December 20, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. First done so far. Kendhal22

  • vampedvixen
    December 5, 2008

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    I've never heard of the style before and I'm going to try looking it up when I'm done writing up this comment. You have a gift for imagery that captures this brief scene so well. You play with your words so wonderfully that it is a sheer joy to read them and to become inspired by them. Bravo on penning such a wonderful poem and for using such a creative new form style. You have a talent for poetry and I hope to read more from you on this site. Please keep posting, I know we'd all love to read more of your wonderful work!

    • kendhal22
      December 6, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you, you brighten my early morning blues. When things get hard durning the holidays I write to keep my sanity in tack. Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Kendhal22


  • PsychoAnalysis
    November 12, 2008

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    THough I have never heard of the style, I find it unique, and I enjoyed the words you used, Best of luck in your contest.

    • kendhal22
      November 12, 2008
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      Thank you

      Thank you for the wonderful comment given to my poem. Kendhal22

  • piccola silver member
    August 13, 2008

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    Unique form, I've heard of it but never seen it until now. It is beautiful but as to the form I have no idea and cannot critique

    • kendhal22
      August 14, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for commenting for my short poem. Basically a pixiku is any length syallable, but in three lines. Like a free verse form.


  • written-in-ink
    August 13, 2008
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    i love it!!!

    "drench its stars wet in the moonlight"
    that was my favorite line


  • crazymomma
    July 7, 2008
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    This was just lovely. well written and a pleasure to read. Thanks for sharing

    • kendhal22
      July 7, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful sentiments given to my poem. Kendhal22


  • Samplette gold member
    May 29, 2008

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    A very well written pixiku. A powerful few words. Thank you so much for entering my contest. I enjoyed.
    Sam

    • kendhal22
      May 29, 2008
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      thank u

      thank u for the wonderful comments given ti pixiku. Kendhal22

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